Review Detail of Pengamat_Ketiga in Danmachi: I'm Getting Skills In The Dungeon!

the story is flat, I read it in faloo up to 21 chapters... for those of you who have read a lot of danmachi fanfiction like me, maybe you will feel the same... especially this MC is very, very lucky, he got 26 million Vali in His first dungeon dive, and it seems to follow the pattern of other stories where people around him are amazed by the MC. The increase in MC's strength is also very fast, on his first dive he increased his status points by 400 points for each attribute, not to mention that with the 26 million Valis that MC has, MC can use that money to withdraw the gacha system which costs 10,000 Valis per withdrawal. you can imagine the increase in MC in the future will be very fast..... for the translation. Good... but this story may not be for me