Fairly rough at the beginning, but does a get a little better. Was a decent story to pass some time; however, the inconsistencies in story development is a bit of a turnoff.
Red_Skin_Duck
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COMMEThe story felt as if you didn’t necessarily plan the development thoroughly at parts. Therefore, we got situations where you would introduce a piece of information that contradicts what we previously new only for you to come back a couple chapters later to patch up. Then the lack of substantial chapters. Some were good, some were a little dull and felt like fillers that brought nothing but chapter count. Not something uncommon for these sites as authors tend to try to provide consistent updates. Just a couple of areas to be aware of for future writings. Not a bad story.