Review Detail of Saltycarmel69 in Reborn as ssj4 gogeta

honestly it wasn't the worst story but definitely not the best out there, but you've killed it and not in the good way, in the way that you broke one of the only rules of writing isekai fan fics in my opinion, you had your character tell about his past which is one of if not the dumbest thing to do, and if that wasn't the worst part you added incest which in my opinion is disgusting beyond measure, it's fine if you want to make an OC lover for your MC but don't do incest it's disgusting. keep your nasty fantasies to yourself nobody wants to hear about your desire to fuck your sister through a fan fic