Review Detail of DavyDarkDaoist in Gaming Empire System

Not a bad spin on the dungeon master concept, but poorly executed. You can’t say the MC oozes confidence in the eyes of others if he’s been described to us as a beta MC until then. The transitions are not indicated and the writing (at least, in the early chapters) is confused syntax errors are common. At least, the grammer is relatively fine. It doesn’t hurt to read like in some other novel, but doesn’t entice to go curther either. If author has improved, he should goba k t’ his early chapters.