Review Detail of Pantano_87 in Speedster in cultivation world

I think this is original?And i am writing this for fun but can you tell what to improve on here have a free meme in exchange.

thanks i forgot about that

try chat gpt, it's free also so basically paste your work in to the writing area then at the end just ask the ai to improve the grammar and punctuation.

is it on the phone?

yh but use the Web version and desktop mode

dank you comrade

have you improved your chapters especially chapter 1