Review Detail of Xl0k0X in cultivating body
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at the time theres only 6 chapters so im not gonna do a full review but so far it seems good the only problem is that sometimes english gets trown into a blender and then pasted here but im goona give it a chance for now
cultivating body
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why dont you use google docs for that it works just like "word" and also has auto correction if i remember correctly also dont make the mc be selfish having the key to power but always keeping it a secret or making things only for himself
jankian:Writing on this app on mobile is hard, so im writing on a different app and copying and pasting it, to his one🥲, ima try to fix all the problems i see, but i am only 1 dude and i suck at English Lol, yes, I am a native English speaker and I still suck at English 😭
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Good idea, and the MC won’t hide his knowledge forever, but at this point in the story, it would be unsafe for him to share the knowledge He is keeping his cards close until he is strong enough to protect them
Xl0k0X:why dont you use google docs for that it works just like "word" and also has auto correction if i remember correctly also dont make the mc be selfish having the key to power but always keeping it a secret or making things only for himself