Review Detail of Lunatic_player in Unlocked Divinity

Hello fellow readers, I'm new to this writing troupe so you may find some things confusing and illogical. I hope you can point out that stuff so I can improve myself better every day. As a writer I would say nothing makes the writer more happier than someone pointing out his mistakes, it's like you gain a chance to improve every second. I will be sure to make this story one of the most interesting ones. I hope we can walk this journey together.