Review Detail of DaoistzuVmua in Game of thrones: The Adventure Ned Stark

Item: Game of thrones: The Adventure Ned Stark
Rating: 2.8

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DaoistzuVmuaLv11mthDaoistzuVmua

Honestly the story is not bad but everything is resolved simply by the power of friendship. and author don't know why some parts are lost, for example when ned strangles the guard it doesn't come out, ned just says "I don't like threats to my family" out of nowhere "ned is vomiting" I don't know if you don't like putting those parts in or When uploading the file to webnovel they are lost or deleted.

Game of thrones: The Adventure Ned Stark

daniel_vera

Liked it!

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daniel_veraAuteurdaniel_vera

"Thank you, I just realized that the part about the murder got erased from the file when translating it, I will add it manually."

1mth

Sabaroth_zarkielLv4Sabaroth_zarkiel

No update on your other fanfic ?

daniel_vera:"Thank you, I just realized that the part about the murder got erased from the file when translating it, I will add it manually."

1mth