I am feeling lazy today so I will keep it short. Good novel. Good potential. Go read. The only thing I want to nitpick about is the character descriptions. I still have no idea how the MC or those around him look except for the fact the MC is supposed to be handsome. No hair color, no eye color. Only mentions of his awesome jawline. So author, pls add descriptions for all the characters and make an auxiliary chap about it or something seeing as how the novel is already 40+ chaps in i suppose that would be a better solution.
PsionicMind
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COMMEPsionicMind:Actually, after thinking it through, I've decided that I'll be editing the book. Thank you for the heads up.image