I believe the author should also add fanfic to the tags, as I’m reading this I can’t help but keep thinking how much it reminds me of the anime: Major. Overall the story is decent some misplaced words every now and then but other than that keep up your fanfic with a system.
leeroycgna
Liked it!
COMMEFYI, just deleted the earlier comment because it contained a lot of spoilers. Fanfic refers to already established universes and using the names of their characters. I do not do any of this. I'm also pretty upfront about my love for major and that there is a lot of inspiration. While I see some similarities I still do not believe this is as straight forward as you claim. Thanks for reading though
Krasion:Not saying it’s a bad thing I loved the anime so I am enjoying your novel too, just thought you should add the tag.