The writing quality and story pacing is great as of chapter 5 with ths main character not being needlessly powerful whule still having potential. The only thing there is to be said negatively is I have no clue how the mc is meant to look.
One_Fall_Leaf
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COMMEOne_Fall_Leaf:Yeah, that's intentional, I don't really describe my main characters so you can just imagine them however you like