It's good but the author struggles with run-on sentences, aka, very long winded sentences. But it's faced paced which makes it an okay read. Other than that, the author is also doing some world building by having a transmigrater, that got his knowledge of Naruto removed, for some boons. The author is also handling the power creep to a decent level, however the MC does feel a bit op, Ch 19, but I know that's because of his potential and not his current ability. I am looking forward to seeing how the author manages that. Overall, if you have read his earlier works, you will like this one as the author has improved.
loskro
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