Review Detail of deaixt in Fate/ Zero : Flugel follows the war

Item: Fate/ Zero : Flugel follows the war
Rating: 4.4

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deaixtLv43mthdeaixt

The concept is good and it has potential. The chapters are not that long but the updudate quantity can make up for it. The only thing I'm sad about is that the writing quality is not that good.

Fate/ Zero : Flugel follows the war

kirigaya_afi

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kirigaya_afiAuteurkirigaya_afi

thanks for the advice, it was very helpful

3mth

deaixtLv4deaixt

There is already some improvement on the recent chapters. But the dialogue's between characters need some improvement. The he/she's are confusing.

kirigaya_afi:thanks for the advice, it was very helpful

3mth