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I personally like this one. The author's writing quality is good. It's still the start so I can say anything about the future but if he continues to write like this and improve then I think this fanfic will be a hit. I think the author should write more words in a chapter. Like 2.5-3k words. Also, you should focus on other characters too. Tell us from their perspective. One more thing, you shouldn't make the MC overpowered from the get go. Being powerful is alright but being overpowered takes the fun away. Make it so that the MC take more time learning his past life skills.

OVERPOWERED SWORD- A DIFFERENT LEON

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Novel_Lover459
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ok

Sabaroth_zarkiel
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No update ??

Novel_Lover459:ok
Dark_PersonJJ
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what happened to you?

Novel_Lover459:ok
Sabaroth_zarkiel
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No update ??

Novel_Lover459:ok
Dark_PersonJJ
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do not bother,

Sabaroth_zarkiel:No update ??
Dark_PersonJJ
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this guy was just bs,just like many others.

Sabaroth_zarkiel:No update ??
Dark_PersonJJ
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you know you are coward and liar right.?

Novel_Lover459:ok