This book has got potential. The plot is interesting so far and the fighting scenes are awesome. The only downside I could point out is grammar which, as someone who struggles with it too, I suggest you use Grammarly to help reduce it. Just a friendly suggestion there :) Please keep up the hard work, I would like to read more.

Nice premise and characters. Funny yet te tension feels real at times. Despite its low chapter count at the moment, it's worth a shot for readers. highly recommend 👌

This story has good level of potential and I must say, it's been an entertaining read so far. Although there are some grammatical errors at the start, it improves as each chapter progresses. One thing I really like in this book is the MC's sense of humour. Zaltar is another character I like aside the MC and I hope his character develops over time.

World building was very solid. Loved the character banters and the combat scenes were also very well thought out. Just an overall solid read with no grammar errors and smooth enjoyable experience. Give it a read!

An interesting and fun light read for anyone. Although it is still in its early stages, it certainly has the potential to become something more than a light read. There are almost no grammar mistakes, the main character is really interesting and the plot is as well.

For those who are looking for a slice-of-life novel, this is for you. While the Author's English isn't the greatest, it's still easy to read, and the slice of life moments are well written. The main character also has an interesting goal. Check it out :)