Review Detail of Daoist_Lake in The Adeptus Custodes(DC)
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Hmmm... Why must Custodes? Custodes and Silence is especially Must Loyal To Emperor in their DNA. it hard to removed. i prefer MC has Primach than Custodes. and MC has Psyker ability? from where this ability come? You must know, Psyker can do magically thing in Warhammer because Physical Reality and Warp is can't separate each other, thats why Psyker can borrow Power of Warp to Physical Reality. And because Physical Reality and Warp can't separate, they influence each other, and make Chaos/Gods born. Now the Power Scaling, who stronger being in Your DC? The Presence? The Goddess? or Warp Being (Chaos)? There too many plothole. Because MC can do Psyker Ability, i doubt Warp Exist in DC. i also doubt Chaos already exist in Warp. in Small Scale (Earth) your fanfic has no plot hole, because its just show-off MC power, and people just think MC just Metahuman. but in Big Scale (Universe, Multiverse) your story have too many Flaw and Plot Hole. and your Character even don't make DC Cosmic Being react, its more weird.
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Daoist_Lake:And what Point your previous comment before this? just sarcastic remark? why you make it like i'am ignored your comment? i reply you.
i just don't like story with Power-Giver ROB (Random Omni Being), Future Vision (Plot) and Slave System'. Many fanfic with 1 from 3 thing above in the first chapter has : 1. Unclear Power Scale, 2. Many Plot Hole in big scale, 3. Unclear Purpose, 4. Just for Show-off or Pick up Girl.
Helia_King:It’s sound like someone was skimming the chapters a bit too fast.
But then again you do leave negative reviews based purely on tags so any reviews you leave shouldn’t be taken seriously or payed attention to.
Daoist_Lake:i just don't like story with Power-Giver ROB (Random Omni Being), Future Vision (Plot) and Slave System'. Many fanfic with 1 from 3 thing above in the first chapter has : 1. Unclear Power Scale, 2. Many Plot Hole in big scale, 3. Unclear Purpose, 4. Just for Show-off or Pick up Girl.
So i must give Positive 5 Star Rating with Negative Review? Nope. It just make author happy. He can delete my review but my 5 Star Rating still counted by apps system. I just pointed whats wrong with plot hole in his story, and how confusion his Power Scale in DC Universe.
Helia_King:But then again you do leave negative reviews based purely on tags so any reviews you leave shouldn’t be taken seriously or payed attention to.
You ignored my point. I’m saying you obviously didn’t read it or didn’t pay attention to the actual story because you don’t like the things you pointed out.Especially because you don’t even read stories with tags that you think don’t make sense together and leave a negative review and you’re saying that the app system will still count your review if you left 5 stars and author deleted it as if negative reviews aren’t counted. You ignored my other comments and made yourself look like a dum**ss.
Daoist_Lake:So i must give Positive 5 Star Rating with Negative Review? Nope. It just make author happy. He can delete my review but my 5 Star Rating still counted by apps system. I just pointed whats wrong with plot hole in his story, and how confusion his Power Scale in DC Universe.
The plot holes were explained throughout the story, maybe not directly explained(which is good most of the time) but they were explained. And if you actually read the story(which you obviously didn’t) you’d have a decent outline of how strong he is compared to certain characters. So again you did not read and just decided to leave a negative review just because it has something you didn’t like(ROB I think).
Daoist_Lake:So i must give Positive 5 Star Rating with Negative Review? Nope. It just make author happy. He can delete my review but my 5 Star Rating still counted by apps system. I just pointed whats wrong with plot hole in his story, and how confusion his Power Scale in DC Universe.
And what Point your previous comment before this? just sarcastic remark? why you make it like i'am ignored your comment? i reply you.
Helia_King:You ignored my point. I’m saying you obviously didn’t read it or didn’t pay attention to the actual story because you don’t like the things you pointed out.Especially because you don’t even read stories with tags that you think don’t make sense together and leave a negative review and you’re saying that the app system will still count your review if you left 5 stars and author deleted it as if negative reviews aren’t counted. You ignored my other comments and made yourself look like a dum**ss.
Helia_King:The plot holes were explained throughout the story, maybe not directly explained(which is good most of the time) but they were explained. And if you actually read the story(which you obviously didn’t) you’d have a decent outline of how strong he is compared to certain characters. So again you did not read and just decided to leave a negative review just because it has something you didn’t like(ROB I think).
That doesn’t really matter since that ROB is not very important past that point so yes your review is dumb.
Daoist_Lake:Of Course. Because This ROB have higher authority than The Presence.
And you also say this like this person is saying that’s canon which they are not so again you are stupid for leaving such a review.
Daoist_Lake:Of Course. Because This ROB have higher authority than The Presence.
At this point you should just delete your review because you’re making yourself look dumber with each comment you leave
Daoist_Lake:Of Course. Because This ROB have higher authority than The Presence.
So i can't leave bad rating and bad review? But i can leave 5 Rating and [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Emoji Review? nope. I do my review pure from my perspective. i don't care about author attention or comment, i just reply the respond from my review.
Helia_King:You ignored what my comments are actually saying just to say something I tried to convey to you.
Yes of course. I know ROB don't matter. She just give away the gift. but how about The Presence and another DC Cosmic Being? if they Omnipotent and Omniscience they know how dangerous MC to they masterplane.
Helia_King:That doesn’t really matter since that ROB is not very important past that point so yes your review is dumb.
There you go again ignoring what I’m saying. This makes it even more obvious that you didn’t even read the fanfic.
Daoist_Lake:So i can't leave bad rating and bad review? But i can leave 5 Rating and [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Emoji Review? nope. I do my review pure from my perspective. i don't care about author attention or comment, i just reply the respond from my review.
Daoist_Lake:So i can't leave bad rating and bad review? But i can leave 5 Rating and [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Emoji Review? nope. I do my review pure from my perspective. i don't care about author attention or comment, i just reply the respond from my review.
They also know what the mc will do so if they do nothing then it’s obvious they don’t care what he does
Daoist_Lake:Yes of course. I know ROB don't matter. She just give away the gift. but how about The Presence and another DC Cosmic Being? if they Omnipotent and Omniscience they know how dangerous MC to they masterplane.
And tell me why the mc is dangerous enough for the presence to intervene when he wouldn’t even do so if darkside showed up
Daoist_Lake:Yes of course. I know ROB don't matter. She just give away the gift. but how about The Presence and another DC Cosmic Being? if they Omnipotent and Omniscience they know how dangerous MC to they masterplane.
Daoist_Lake:Yes of course. I know ROB don't matter. She just give away the gift. but how about The Presence and another DC Cosmic Being? if they Omnipotent and Omniscience they know how dangerous MC to they masterplane.