Review Detail of LampWriter in Argonaut 51

Author review! Just a new fledgling writer, hoping to get a story I've been planning for a long while now. I'm not perfect, and the first few chapters a definitely a bit rough but I'm getting to it. Please leave a review, whether you hate it or like it, I appreciate every one that comes my way. Wan't to make it the best that it can be. Enjoy!