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I am giving you a 5 because it is well written and interesting! The only thing I would suggest is possibly push the world building out a few chapters because the first 3 chapters are slow and you want to ideally capture your reader's attention front the start. I would find a way to weave this stuff into the events of the story as trickles of info.

Ancestral Throne : Building The Strongest Empire In Another World

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Thanks for the review i will consider ,thanks. And again thanks for the review.