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Review Detail of Allhavens in Ultimate Being from the Tokonosu City

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The story started well, but quickly became rubbish because of the MC. Listing the negative points: 1 - For some reason, the MC didn't get rid of the canonical protagonist. So you keep saving him like a babysitter. Which is strange, because it constantly says that this canonical protagonist is a recipe for disaster. But why don't you get rid of it? 2 - For some reason, the MC keeps using the catchphrase of being a good person, whenever he does something wrong. He doesn't seem to have fixed values ​​or morals, making him a disgusting hypocrite. If you're good or bad, I don't care, but having these values ​​that change depending on the situation is annoying. 3 - The story quickly loses its plot and becomes pure b*tching. Some action happens and then it's sex with everyone, one by one, including the mothers of the girls he picks up. It wouldn't surprise me if he starts the demons too. which he ends up doing too, lol 4 - Get a woman pregnant in one world, fuck the others in the other world. That's when you don't have to babysit the extra character. But he neglects his system. if a person with minimal brain development would be this MC, he would have already obtained the DNA of all the animals in the world, not to mention the long-lived, regenerative ones, with exoskeletons or special abilities like the chameleon. This MC is very useless 5 - A lot of drama, when it doesn't involve the canonical protagonist, involves extra characters. And it is always with the intention of helping or saving someone. It's okay to do it once or twice, but I've lost count of how often this happens. 6 - Every one or two chapters, there is an explanation of how good he is and that he could be a terrible person. Oh, how adorable our MC is. 7 - This involves other previous points, but the MC is the supreme simp. Rei begs the MC to save the canonical protagonist after he attracts a bunch of zombies to them and runs away. And he continues his quest to be a good person. Detail: This is repeated for almost every girl he knows (save my friend, save my father, save my mother, save my boyfriend, avenge the death of that extra character,...). It's very simp for my taste.

Ultimate Being from the Tokonosu City

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