Review Detail of Alan_Grimlord in Mission: Seduce the Master!

great first few chapter's its kinda to like I mean the sentence kindad like space out a bit you just fix that the story has potienal to be good not one of the greats but good https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qOtwfyMa5mM&list=RDjvU4xWsN7-A&index=27