Review Detail of Kerplunkered in Kaiser of the New World

Yeah I'm rating for myself, if I don't do it first who will? Anyway, I appreciate anyone who reads this, even if you quit at chapter one it's still one extra read for me, still, I would appreciate you more if you read all the chapters though. As is said in the overview, I aim to have characters with their own personalities and goals, an immersive world and hopefully a good romance subplot (which will probably take me a while, I quite like slow burn). If you would ever so kindly leave your own reviews and critiques it would be very helpful, so thank you in advance.