Review Detail of ShiningJoy in The First Legendary Beast Master

Only reach chapter 24 but this story isn’t good writing quality is around average on this platform (pretty bad). Story development is lacking alot of detail and interest MC is just given everything he needs. World background is trash book starts when the MC is introduced to the mana shots and instantly taken away to military not a single word about his parents (they are alive) and not a single word about his home town other then it’s a mining town, MC just naturally knows alot about the world and how the world and the “elite” behavior works. Character development like the world building is really bad as well cause with such a lacking world building it’s impossible to have a real character until now it’s basically-ryan- introduced gets the mana shot - goes on train to elite academy - find how his power works- gets into the academy - trains with private instructor. Here in 4 lines I conclude 24 chapters.