The story is good, and the characters are flushed out, could have been at a better time tbh. Otherwise it is a pretty good story. if you like this kind of story then I think you would like this one.
thank u for the response. Although, i know i could've made this at a better time, this is more of a story of his adventures, at the end, he'll end being called back home by the moon after completing his goal. But thank you for reviewing! This will help me improve!