Review Detail of carlodee_ in Jinnx Hunter

Highly recommended! But here's some things that I find so far: * Despite minor errors that may have been overlooked, the overall writing remains polished and engaging. Great job! * Some readers (or maybe just me) may find the story development to be slower than expected for an action-fantasy novel. It takes several chapters just for the soul turfing alone. * Character design is actually good, with vivid descriptions allowing readers (or maybe just me, 'cause I have been reading fantasy novels for a long time already) to easily envision the appearance and personalities of the characters--personally like seven lords' outfit. You can add more small details though, but overall its good. * I find the world-building to be lacking in clarity, considering the story development is a bit slower. Well, too early to judge. Good thing, in Chapter 12, world building took few steps. Overall, I loved it. Highly recommend. Good job.