Pls dont have romance its really rare to se a novel without romance or haren and most of them turn out well like. Greed all for what or Naruto wind calamity. Anyway so far your fan fic is pretty good
Rtanj
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Romance is good in all story's It's just how it's written that matter by the Arthur's
I'm thinking about not adding romance too, and thanks!