Review Detail of Green_oranges in Heaven's Ruler

Item: Heaven's Ruler
Rating: 4.4

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So far the plot has been quite interesting and has great potential but my only gripe is how the angels tend to use language of commoners

Heaven's Ruler

UsedCarpet

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UsedCarpetAuteurUsedCarpet

fair, I wrote it like that because the way I see it, the angels would only use much more sophisticated language when dealing with mortals. when they talk with each other I feel it would be informal, as most 'friends' would talk

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Yea I see that makes much more as to why they speak like that thx for telling me ur reasoning

UsedCarpet:fair, I wrote it like that because the way I see it, the angels would only use much more sophisticated language when dealing with mortals. when they talk with each other I feel it would be informal, as most 'friends' would talk

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UsedCarpetAuteurUsedCarpet

no worries

Green_oranges:Yea I see that makes much more as to why they speak like that thx for telling me ur reasoning

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Kys

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is there romance?

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