Review Detail of 00Mark in Villain: Ultimate Mutation System in the Alternate World

you had me hooked and completely intrigued until chapter 19.. listen, at this point we barely know anything about the main character, there's a hunter coming to kill him and he's getting stronger, but your decision is to introduce a mary sue and have her toying the mc around, killing any hype and tension built up! if she didn't tell us from the get-go about wanting to be friends with him we would've been worried about how his first supernatural fight would go, and then would be surprised by how he got a strong ally, but no, it was just an ability showcase/exhibition. wish there was an option to leave a review without score, find it kinda unfair to rate a novel based on 19 chapters, guess i'll leave a 5* to not ruin the rating with such a low quality review.