Review Detail of erebuss in My Wife Is The Most Beautiful Princess In The Heaven Realm

The only thing that’s really a negative in this story is the grammar sometimes you mix the genders up it’s not that bad, but pretty annoying . So far the story is really good and I like how straightforward you made one of the female leads. Keeep up the good work . Just a little bit of editing and this story would even better but I know since the story is in its early stages and you aren’t really getting paid that much there won’t be an editor any time soon but keep up your consistency