Review Detail of LibofAl in Devour X multiply

The premis of the story has potential, especially for those who like OP MCs. The English needs some fine tuning but it is readable and the author has already acknowledged this point. I believe that if the author can sit down and come up with a major problem for the MC to try and fix or a goal to achieve, like one of the Beast kingdoms or a monster from the revine try to destroy the kingdom the MC is currently in, as well as some small problem that can be fixed in just a few chapters, like defeating a stonger monster, joining an academy, clearing a low-level dungeon, etc., then it would be easier to peice together a fuller story line. Author, I hope this story can go far and you have fun while writting it, you're doing great so far.