First, the story follows the canon, but nothing new exists. But the most important thing is that he is just too stupid, at the start he said he had no money, but then he can make gunpowder, so just selling that formula to anyone could have earned him a fortune. Also, he fights with the little fairy doctor, but just by having a good relationship with her he could have earned much more, after all, she is not an alchemist. So I don't recommend this.
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