Review Detail of Hardy1j in Taking It All From The Protagonist
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I don't know how to describe what I feel, it just felt a waste of time to read this. The story is that bad. Originally, I wouldn't have read this after the author said the romance will be where fl might die before getting replaced since I hate that. But there was next to no romance till now, making me read. Here starts my real review: Writing Quality: It isn't amazing or bad. Just average with many typos. Readable, nonetheless(better than 50% on this app...) Story: Guess how much time passed? 2 days. Yep, you read that right. That's how you know this has next to no story, let alone development. At least, that's how it appeared to me. Characters: The side characters are well-written and their description make them feel somewhat real. The problem is the MC, the one we are supposed to read. He has positives, like he is an adult. Unfortunately, his smartness, cunning, and planning nature is forgotten as the book continues. All that's left is an adult in a child's body with impulsive anger disorder. You can prolly guess what happens, right? He wants everyone under him and in control, he doesn't trust anyone. Just making them sign sla. ve contracts... Now, that is understandable, given the world, but if you read, you will understand what I mean. World background: Non-existent. Conclusion: Not my cup of tea. If you like an edgy, immature, Protagonist, then go for it. Despite the story having a good premise, it just failed to meet any expectations one can have... I hope you don't delete my review and improve yourself as an author...
Taking It All From The Protagonist
Averagewrites
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raizell24:well i feel you bro...ever since he turns him to edgy and psycho kid who liked to see people kill each other in front of him and the author thought this is cool i know where all this is going. it's unfortunate that such a good plot and characters turned to this
i doubt i would delete it, a review is a review. Objectively, i understand your point. Subjectively, You have your preference and i have mine. You read what you like and leave the others out, i like that you did the same here and i am already working on my writing since i didnt exactly learn to be a writer. In any case, Goodbye as well, there really are alot more to you and the readers that like the novels they like. I am creating one for people like me... When its done, its done. Thanks for the review anyway.
raizell24:well i feel you bro...ever since he turns him to edgy and psycho kid who liked to see people kill each other in front of him and the author thought this is cool i know where all this is going. it's unfortunate that such a good plot and characters turned to this
I agree with your viewpoint and thanks for accepting my viewpoint. Usually, I see authors just straight-out deleting reviews below 5 star even if they are true!! And you are right, you aren't a professional writer. But you need to understand people need to pay to read, that is, they have expectations, compelling authors to improve and that you are doing, so congratulations. Also, I am an author too so I get what you mean. Goodluck and bye, i guess?
Averagewrites:i doubt i would delete it, a review is a review. Objectively, i understand your point. Subjectively, You have your preference and i have mine. You read what you like and leave the others out, i like that you did the same here and i am already working on my writing since i didnt exactly learn to be a writer. In any case, Goodbye as well, there really are alot more to you and the readers that like the novels they like. I am creating one for people like me... When its done, its done. Thanks for the review anyway.
Averagewrites:I guess anyone enjoying the novel is wasting their time, sorry everyone. Read what i got to offer or Go. This includes everyone, whether you like the novel or not. You can write yours, Thank you.