Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in Taking It All From The Protagonist

The grammar and whatnot is excellent. The updates are consistent. The story develops nicely. The characters seem interesting, but I'd like more vivid breakdowns of different ones at the start (instead of that dynamic with the MC). The style is distinct and really stands out from most. Being a visual person, I'd like to know more about what the characters look like and the view of the environment around them. The worldbuilding is great. This is an interesting read for people who appreciate magical adventures. To the writer, I welcome you to check out my original fanfic "Avatar: The Vindicated Avenger" it is a sequel to "Avatar: Macai's Journey". It can be found here on Webnovel with a quick search. You may want to read the first chapter or two of AMJ to get a feeling of what the first story was like but that isn't necessary.