Review Detail of Demon_Cultivator_ in I Became an Extra, and to Survive, I Must Kill the MC.
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Nice novel but just not my type, the mc is too emotional, focusing on useless things instead of things dat really matter. I mean flirting with a girl instead of trying to solve the issue of his talent or training to get stronger, in my opinion he’s too relaxed in the human world when the world is in a state of war. and other characters seem fake and their behavior is not in line with their character ( Like the mc master meeting for their first training and the master is blushing seeing the mc naked with only shorts on like fr what is she a teenager?? No matter the inexperience that is not supposed to happen with a warrior as strong as she is. Also she’s get fuzzy over words from her disciple who they just had their first meeting like a love seeking teen that does not go well with her character and it seems forced.) Reading this novel gives me goosebumps 🤦🏽♂️ Author you would have done better writing it as a serious novel instead of the flirting and emotional ramble cos it does not go well with the world building like building a harem in a world that might be destroyed any day by war means the person is incredibly strong or incredibly stupid.
I Became an Extra, and to Survive, I Must Kill the MC.
Stellar_NYX
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I understand... your feeling, I got the same feeling when I wrote this chapter, but for some reason I still wrote it that way, as if I got possessed or something .. ..and I also believe that the Mc got too softie, so well, we will go hard mode from now on, so, the mc will no longer simping or bootlicking anyone from now on...
Alright if you say so then I’ll hang on, I will be waiting for updates. Let the mc have some kind of realization or reality check that will bring him back on track, I think it will make sense dat way and not disturb the flow of the novel. Thanks author and goodluck👍
Stellar_NYX:I understand... your feeling, I got the same feeling when I wrote this chapter, but for some reason I still wrote it that way, as if I got possessed or something .. ..and I also believe that the Mc got too softie, so well, we will go hard mode from now on, so, the mc will no longer simping or bootlicking anyone from now on...
Author, you are too good for listening to brats like this complaining about the Mc's personality, traits, doings, etc.. Character Progressive Growth and Character Development are a thing you know. Well, they could give ideas and suggest them to you, but please don't let them force you. It's your work, you can do anything you want whether you make a scum MC be developed to become a manipulative but good MC, it will always be your choice. His, complaining about the comedy, cool references, and the novel not being serious is just being impatient about the novel's development. If he leaves because of his different taste, let him be, he shouldn't try to force you to the he likes it abruptly... Once again Character development is a thing and a must
Stellar_NYX:I understand... your feeling, I got the same feeling when I wrote this chapter, but for some reason I still wrote it that way, as if I got possessed or something .. ..and I also believe that the Mc got too softie, so well, we will go hard mode from now on, so, the mc will no longer simping or bootlicking anyone from now on...
Firstly i never meant to complain and I said at the beginning “nice novel but not my type”. I’m not trying to force anything on the Author just saying what I have noticed and perhaps other people have noticed it too,So no hard feelings bruh I’m just giving a honest review with no bad intentions, nobody is perfect and obviously a novel can’t be perfect either but by the reviews of different people the author can find ways to improve the novel with his imagination. I honestly can’t write a novel half as good as this so I respect author for that, I’m just a honest reader 🤓
Vince_Gregorie:Author, you are too good for listening to brats like this complaining about the Mc's personality, traits, doings, etc.. Character Progressive Growth and Character Development are a thing you know. Well, they could give ideas and suggest them to you, but please don't let them force you. It's your work, you can do anything you want whether you make a scum MC be developed to become a manipulative but good MC, it will always be your choice. His, complaining about the comedy, cool references, and the novel not being serious is just being impatient about the novel's development. If he leaves because of his different taste, let him be, he shouldn't try to force you to the he likes it abruptly... Once again Character development is a thing and a must
Oof I was half awake writing my comment , Forgive me my insults 😅. Well you do have a point, the MC was an emotional fool, naive?, etc. and What I was trying was to convince the Author to take the novel and character development more seriously since he might abruptly change the MC's behaviour without much development (which would be a disaster if it would happen) and other reason based on his reply but then my paragraph became somewhat messy and insulting? And somehow I took this review as a complaint for the Author's way of writing.
Demon_Cultivator_:Firstly i never meant to complain and I said at the beginning “nice novel but not my type”. I’m not trying to force anything on the Author just saying what I have noticed and perhaps other people have noticed it too,So no hard feelings bruh I’m just giving a honest review with no bad intentions, nobody is perfect and obviously a novel can’t be perfect either but by the reviews of different people the author can find ways to improve the novel with his imagination. I honestly can’t write a novel half as good as this so I respect author for that, I’m just a honest reader 🤓
Nah it’s cool man ✌️ you’re right an abrupt change to the mc character might ruin the story, i get that too and that’s why I suggested to the author in my other comment to make a mc have a realization or reality check so that he will be able to change the mc character without disturbing the plot (but it’s just a suggestion and it’s totally up to the author,I’m just waiting for updates)
Vince_Gregorie:Oof I was half awake writing my comment , Forgive me my insults 😅. Well you do have a point, the MC was an emotional fool, naive?, etc. and What I was trying was to convince the Author to take the novel and character development more seriously since he might abruptly change the MC's behaviour without much development (which would be a disaster if it would happen) and other reason based on his reply but then my paragraph became somewhat messy and insulting? And somehow I took this review as a complaint for the Author's way of writing.image
Demon_Cultivator_:Nah it’s cool man ✌️ you’re right an abrupt change to the mc character might ruin the story, i get that too and that’s why I suggested to the author in my other comment to make a mc have a realization or reality check so that he will be able to change the mc character without disturbing the plot (but it’s just a suggestion and it’s totally up to the author,I’m just waiting for updates)