Review Detail of Prakash_Das_7278 in Pokemon System in Anime Worlds

too bad the grammar is all over the place and the story lacks proper punctuation's as well as proper descriptions of who is talking or what is happening

thanks for the comments, I will try to improve my grammar in my following chapters.

know what you should do is stop making chapters go back and fix what you've already written

what is original title

can you please go back and edit the first chapters and change the writing? The dialog and the description make it exctremely hard to keep reading... I'm only at chapter 3 and I already cannot stand the number of time the name of the MC is writen nor the way the speach are handeled.