Review Detail of RikuKage in Douluo: My Martial Soul Is The Infinity Stones
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Well, so far, I like your story. it's different, and I can't wait to see more. I have just one suggestion, You should do the spirit rings so they don't give abilities like Ye Lingling martial spirit Nine Heart Flowering Apple. The Nine Heart Flowering Apple only has one kind of effect. No matter how many spirit rings it has, it only has one spirit ability. Its effect is in the scope of healing. The degree of healing is controlled by the Spirit Master’s intentions. The higher the rank, the more spirit rings, the more its healing can be used. Since the Infinity Stones already have abilities, just do the same. Adding Spirit ability seems complicated.
Douluo: My Martial Soul Is The Infinity Stones
To3Na1ls
Liked it!
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I figured as much. The reason I scored so low because the dialogue is horrible they could at least put parentheses. Occasionally, I like reading overpowered work. it's not my favorite genre I just like to see how they write it.
To3Na1ls:I dont blame you everyone has there tase thats understandable, but i have no rights to this novel and am merely translating it onto webnovel, and thank you for reading