Hi Author!! I love your boom đđ I guess im everywhere hehe đ€ So i def love your story line it nice, and ypu potray each emotions quite well!! A quick advice, when a character is talking could you use this a quotation mark, i got confused đ„Č Just like this âHi im aliceâ she said Use this so we wont get confused Keep up the good work
Macky_starr
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