Review Detail of Elmarc_Yarka in Creating Navy In Naruto World

Ok, how should I put it. Reading this feels like eating a stale piece of bread. It is bearable, you can read it. but i recommend you turn your brain off while reading this. because honestly, the only thing special about this is the setting. but story itself is nothing special. The characters, including the mc have little to no personality whatsoever. They treat the characters other than those from the mc's group like animals. And plus, everyone other than the mc have below average IQ and EQ. So if you expected plot driven story with amazing political maneuvering, kingdom building, relationship management, and battle of mind and wits between the legends of each world, this fic is not for you. Its just pure crushing might of the Marine againts the shinobis.