Hi author here, There are people who asked, is this translated version from chinese novel? Answer: its mine, not translated version. Eventhough you saw on my synopsis gundam susanoo. I just feel like it to put gundam susanoo instead of susanoo. Oh dont forget to support me on patreon
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COMMEYap28:author you got some interesting plot here, but you only release a lil bit chapter and they're pretty short, i'm dissapointed 😔, hope u can release 10 chapter tomorrow so u make ur reader happy (like me) lol, keep it up author
Fellow_Daoist_John:for a moment I was scared when I saw that it said Gundam in the synopsis, I was about to ignore this novel, but I'll give it a chance.
I think adding Gundam to describe Susanoo is cool, it's not like you are saying "He launched his Gundam, his Tempestuous God of Valour, his Susanoo, the embodiment of the ability to help by all means." Because that would be a mouthful... As that would remind me of those poorly translated MTLs that use "Three jade magatama mirror copy-wheel chakra eyes" to describe "3 tomoe sharingans". Anyways, I havn't actually started to read your work yet, I am about to binge the 20 available chapters. If I don't delete this comment, it means I thought it was good. :D 😄
monkedance:change story description. it sounds like typical Chinese MTL stories