My only problem with this story is the author always mixes up he's and she's with different characters and then mixes up the proper nouns for like Grandpa when it should have been grandma. also the main protagonist is named Ni Yang but the author keeps changing it to Ni Yan which happens to be her little sister's name but also she calls her a him sometimes. luckily the sentence structures are still good to the point we understand what's happening but still it takes you out of the story to go "what!!!!"
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COMMEand you didn't have to comment but here we are. Plus I didn't say I didn't like the novel I just said that was my only problem with the novel.
Brian70707:you don't read enough if that is your only issues plenty of better novels