Like if I kindly said, author you needs time not for the chapter release but how you wrote it . Like it's rushed yet it fells slowly paced from ch 1-5 then ch-6 was good but after that all that gone was slow pacing. The story had potential but it's not getting executed well, the author is newbie but still take your time thinking not what to write for now but how it's main for you. The power system is good ,but also the small fight scenes is good and the chapters are short. I had said many critisim but thus are important, and also the good factors I don't wanna talk about it, just know it yourself
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