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Plot_Armor
Plot_ArmorLv47mth
2024-04-01 13:49

Weirdest novel ever, the way author writes the description sounded quite nice until I realized it was the same over and over again. As a testament to my unwavering resolve, here is bingo card to tick each chapter: - testament - unwavering - resolve - determination - beacon - newfound - "This ends now" - stark contrast - "You gotta do better than that" - voice laced with gravity/concern - spoke volume of - commitment - crackled with energy - relentless - shimmered - sent ripples - ... I actually have dozens more but I'll stop here. It feels like some AI trained is regurgitating the same battles for 5+ chapters. After the time skip, novel becomes an absolute slog, author gave up on strategy, there is no challenge, nothing makes sense, also MC and Ophelia personality changes and become total Chuunibyou. Dialogs are cringe, "This ends now" or "Impressive" to an opponent? thankfuly before, the opponents are zombies and don't talk. People learned names of their opponents magically as well. In general, the descriptions are just over the top for a poor story.

Zombolution: Unleash the Undying Power

HaozDancer
3.6
287 Chs

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HaozDancer
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Shameless Author Here. I made a new one again for the WPC. I hope that you liked it, and please give some good reviews. HEHEHEHE.[img=recommend]

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Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Absolute garbage. I’m surprised anyone could even choke this down, seeing as I couldn’t. Anyways, moving onto the actual review: Writing quality: 2/5. There aren’t many mistakes, so that would be a 4, but the fact that I can’t imagine a single place because the author never describes the scenes drops it to a 3. And then adding the fact that literally 90% of the dialogue is extremely cringe and feels like a punishment to read, that drops it to a 2. Updating Stability: 5/5. Can’t say anything since the novel is completed. Story Development: 2/5. The novel procrastinates on literally the most useless things, but constantly skips important things. Terrible pacing overall, and made the novel extremely painful to even get through, so I had to drop it around chapter. 30. Character Design: 1/5. This is the reason I dropped. Not only is the main character’s name the dumbest thing I’ve ever laid eyes on, but his decisions make no sense either. One second he’s whining about how his group betrayed him, and then he’s killing innocent people in the name of evolution. Hypocrite at it’s finest. The main reason I dropped was the main character being extremely cringe though. He’s the type of person to say “Let’s do this!” before a fight, or the type of person to yell before he attacks someone from a sneak attack. World Background: 2/5. I could only choke down 30 chapters, but there’s been no crucial world building so far.

8mth
Sadast
SadastLv15

story became repetitive. and not alot of explanation on really anything. the start is pretty disjointed and can be hard to follow

8mth
Deranwood
DeranwoodLv1

Hello, I am trying to build a community for writers and would love for you to join. There is a discord link to join at the bottom of the webpage. There is also a contest going on for a cash prize if you wish to take part at zenithnovels.com. I hope to see you around!

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Ovito
OvitoLv11

Very good novel

11mth
SRKing
SRKingLv3

It was good story. But then the same repetition. And so much AI is used, it makes reading very boring.

4mth
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NitrogenousBeing
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Terrible, padded, and repetitive AI-like writing. Inconsistent, nondescriptive and abstract details. Inconsistent characters. Dull plot.

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