Add more details on your synopsis, so we will know more about the world you build. First and second chapters are well written, there's no need to add. He has a darkness power right? I'm expecting you'll add something more about his power next and how he will fight using it.. there's a lot of darkness power fighting scene we can read. the question is what uniqueness your novel can offer. I'm looking forward.
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