great writing, a interesting plot so far, good character development (at current chapters even the supporting charaters have a living feel to them amd not just well flat) interesting level system(but the numbers do go quite high) will update when more chapters are out
Silent_stiele
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COMMESilent_stiele:Thank you for the review, I sincerely appreciate any feedback that can help me improve the story further.
I just hope you do know that Pokemon that sentient being that means they can talk they can speak think some of them are even smarter than humans so is this story going to treat them like animals animals that we have on our planet even though some of them are cultured to be like animals such as low intelligent beings there are signs in both anime and manga of the Pokemon series that they have an IQ that is equivalent of the human race