Review Detail of Irebornintheboys in God of Thunder thor with system

I think you'll end up giving up on this story too, it's a bit too messy, and quick. but you seem to like Thor, so my advice is to take DC's Thor again, which for me is the better idea of the two, but not to publish anything for a week. find the characters you are going to talk about, write their characters, their desires, the problems they have. then create links, and when you have thoroughly researched your story, start writing.