Review Detail of Cosmic_Phantom in Equation of Eternity:The Cosmic Convergence

Well I guess it's quite abnormal to review my own novel, but what the heck, I couldn't give my self 5 stars as I no I am lacking in multiple places, but still I am not going to brutally murder my work. Improvements Will come here and there, but I have faith that this novel will turn out awesome, so I beg you, if you have started with me last, then don't give up, by the next 50 chapters I will make sure you don't regret staying