Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in Destined In His Darkness

Ok, the writing quality here is superb. This is among the most elegant I've seen on Webnovel. Updates are steady, no complaints there. The story seems to develop nicely. The few issues I see in this story is, that so much focus is placed on masterfully concocting sentences, that not enough time is focused on having a clear direction in this story. What I mean is, the description of the environment does not seem to get as much to the point as it could. The description of what the characters look like, what the background looks like, and the use of dialogue could be more developed. If the author works on putting these together and pairing them with the raw emotional tone that is needed to grip readers then it will be one of Webnovel's very best. Best wishes to your author, I invite new reads to dive in this adventure. I invite you to read and analyze my fanfic "Avatar: Lingering Tensions". It is a sequel to "Avatar: Macai's Journey" however, reading the 1st chapter of AMJ could give you some basic context if you are unfamiliar with the storyline.