Ignore me, I'm Just Doing the Tradition. Also English is not my first language so I kinda afraid to start this project, but someone said: You don't have to see the whole staircase, just take the first step.” — Martin Luther King Jr.

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New review, made when the story reached 33 chapters. The author said that the book was translated, but still the writing is sometimes very weird. Lately, the author is not using the correct tenses and, the way the characters talk is very weird. Here's an example: Hermione and Leo are talking alone and Leo says: "Hermione doesn't need to move the wand that fast, Hermione should move more gently."

I liked this fanfic, but it became stale very quick. I'm following other author's fics, but they have the same problem. It's not fun, there's no comedy relief and that's why it's became an average fic in my eyes, sorry.

It is a really good story so keep up the great work ! So I am giving five stars because it is really good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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A short story, but a complete one nonetheless, for that alone its worth 3*. The Translation is nothing special, with a lot of mistakes that break the immersion, especially the ones where the Translator mixed up the MC's name with Hermione's name. As for everything else, while research oriented and teacher MC's are my absolut favorite type in any setting, the MC's personality is so dull and boring that I have nothing good to say, except the attempt to "remove" Harry and deal with certain events in his own way.

The story feels empty, even boring, there is very little to say about the rest, there is a clear lack of progress and the story feels like it is stagnant.

This is a really great story and it is probably one of the best I have read about the Harry Potter world.

The story is engaging with minimal errors; however, the author seems unfamiliar with proper grammar. It appears as if it were translated directly from another language without accounting for grammatical differences.