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Hermione and The Genius Magic Formula (Harry Potter Fanfic)

Ginormous_Madman
3.9
93 Chs

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Ginormous_Madman
Ginormous_MadmanAuthor

Ignore me, I'm Just Doing the Tradition. Also English is not my first language so I kinda afraid to start this project, but someone said: You don't have to see the whole staircase, just take the first step.” — Martin Luther King Jr.

1yr

Varts
VartsLv13

Reveal spoiler

10mth
Pires_1123
Pires_1123Lv4

New review, made when the story reached 33 chapters. The author said that the book was translated, but still the writing is sometimes very weird. Lately, the author is not using the correct tenses and, the way the characters talk is very weird. Here's an example: Hermione and Leo are talking alone and Leo says: "Hermione doesn't need to move the wand that fast, Hermione should move more gently."

12mth
R0B
R0BLv2

I liked this fanfic, but it became stale very quick. I'm following other author's fics, but they have the same problem. It's not fun, there's no comedy relief and that's why it's became an average fic in my eyes, sorry.

1yr
Martin147
Martin147Lv3

It is a really good story so keep up the great work ! So I am giving five stars because it is really good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

1yr
DaoistrtvHhk
DaoistrtvHhkLv2

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1yr
CrowMoonrise
CrowMoonriseLv1

A short story, but a complete one nonetheless, for that alone its worth 3*. The Translation is nothing special, with a lot of mistakes that break the immersion, especially the ones where the Translator mixed up the MC's name with Hermione's name. As for everything else, while research oriented and teacher MC's are my absolut favorite type in any setting, the MC's personality is so dull and boring that I have nothing good to say, except the attempt to "remove" Harry and deal with certain events in his own way.

9mth
Miki_Marlo75
Miki_Marlo75Lv4

The story feels empty, even boring, there is very little to say about the rest, there is a clear lack of progress and the story feels like it is stagnant.

10mth
Trewan_Games
Trewan_GamesLv4

This is a really great story and it is probably one of the best I have read about the Harry Potter world.

10mth
Pires_1123
Pires_1123Lv4

The story is engaging with minimal errors; however, the author seems unfamiliar with proper grammar. It appears as if it were translated directly from another language without accounting for grammatical differences.

10mth
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