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Review Detail of Cha0sTheory in The System of Prosperity: The Ring of Wisdom

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Cha0sTheory
Cha0sTheoryLv148mthCha0sTheory

It's not a bad novel, but the issue is there are so many unnecessary details that I doubt anyone reads. lengthy descriptions on an apartment building taking up more than a chapter, sooo much introspection with lengthy thought processes. etc.If there was more actual story, I probably would have rated this 5 stars.

The System of Prosperity: The Ring of Wisdom

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Cha0sTheory
Cha0sTheoryLv14Cha0sTheory

I still think it's too wordy and detail oriented about non important matters (even post chaoter 17)

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Easy_2560AuteurEasy_2560

I appreciate your review and will make an effort to enhance my focus on the story.