I enjoyed the idea behind the story, but a number of issues are glaring. Firstly it is highly noticeable English is not the first language and needs either a translator or a rewrite. The characters are given very brief descriptions which matches the world. Even though this is one of those story's that the MC obtains the previous memory the world background is a mystery only knowing about the city name and forest name along with the market and guild. I personally did not check the update stability but I have not seen many updates thus last week in general. Some of the ideas also dont add up in the story for example the original price stated for herb is 10 silver coins each, but the price given is 10 copper coins each. Overall I enjoy the idea; it's nothing new, but still a pleasant read as long as you dont mind the language issues
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